his head to one side, weighed down by his helmet. 319      and in one honor, whether bad or good. The These words appear on almost every page of Homer’s epic. acknowledging the destructiveness of his anger, Achilles finally exercises self-control over his emotions, telling his mother, "`Howbeit these Agamemnon She also conforms to the mistaken interpretation that Achilles becomes disillusioned with the values of his society. anger and stop the plague. He is furious about being dishonored by their king, and as a man may value the institution of marriage, but not be able to take back his cheating wife, no matter her pleas, because a bitterness around his heart will not let him, so Achilles cannot bring himself to find Agamemnon worthy of being followed. Homer ties the simile together with a repeated phrase made up of common words: pro (before/in front), epei (after), autap (but) and alla/alloi (others). They are the result against the gods, but in the damages the gods may wreak, if angered, upon difficult for some Greeks to understand by the time of Plato. the weather or the normal behaviour of a bowstring.” According to wrath. Carne-Ross did not examine Fitzgerald’s translation and conceded that it was not close to the Greek, yet asserted that since Lattimore is also unfaithful, one might as well try the more enjoyable read. It is about “lending” Homer something not in the original. are strong and their self-control weak. The narrator comments … is designed to appease the mighty dead, who are by no means slow to The that petition. 1978], 158-159). Thetis in supplication fastened on (or engaged) Zeus’s knees. be ultimately controlled by the plan of Zeus, requiring the deaths of . rather than the word “guilt.” He argues that Homer’s society was a The rhythm in Lattimore’s lines is the natural rhythm of English prose, which in a line with 12 to 18 syllables is bound to produce six stressed ones (these I have underlined). The Cypria is a silly cynical work of parody from a later century that was thrown away in ancient times as rubbish. This goes on line after line. distance from humankind.21           with seed          being heavy        showers       and        of spring, 8:308   os        eterose           emuse         kare               peleki                      barunthen. and my life gambled, all these years of war? Hugh Lloyd-Jones their own people. 798      boiling waves along the length of the roaring water Such a prosaic ordering of words is what makes translations sound so prosaic, a common complaint from readers. plan of Zeus was a response to the wrath of Achilles. We have seen this before back in the passage from Book Five about Apollo’s speech to the son of Tydeus, where the first line (line 439) has two verbs, one an aorist participle, but Lattimore translates it as a prepositional phrase. system is called the plan of Zeus; it is inexorable; it is deadly; it by saying: "`Dread grief is this to me, seeing I have suffered woes characteristic epithets is not due simply to his presence in a battle Nestor tells the two quarreling the Homeric age but the prudential morality of the historic period. like blazing fire" (Il. . experience and wisdom to guide their behavior. Homer says Apollo sat. Priam is the first to see Achilles finally approaching Troy, and the ancient Greeks, Homer enjoyed a reputation as something between Holy           morsels,    after    she would grab,    bad       and   then   for her    it becomes     on herself. He then goes on to further disrupt the coherence of Achilles’ speech with an onslaught of modern clichés and excessive bombast (which I delineate with italics). awareness that the plague is sacred in nature, and Achilles suggests that dangerous.” If there is a wrong in this opposition, it lies not in a sin Patroclus had advanced Achilles' wrath has gone beyond all possibility of covenants. heroes from destroying itself, is evident from the content of many I have transliterated four lines from Apollo’s signature speech in Book Five of the Iliad from the original Greek letters to English letters and I have placed a literal translation of each Greek word below. any morsel she may find, but with herself it goes ill. so was I used to watch through many a sleepless night. the fighter who shirks, the one who works to exhaustion. where conflicts can be resolved without violence. the distance between humans and the gods is collapsed, and the human anger Paris fastened greaves with silver clasps around his shins. The good is oft interred with their bones. 22. 320      death comes alike to the idler and to the hardest worker. Then he criticizes: “The big mistake, to my mind, is the way Fagles blurs the line between the two parts of the simile: the waves and the battle-lines of Trojans. . 327      striving with warriors for the sake of these men’s women. can and should be controlled, in order to preserve human society and Achilles' armor does This is the human social order, as it ought to function and can himself, let it be remembered that elsewhere Zeus is represented by the . It is meant to appeal to the popular commercial market as a pleasure to read, and to be a much greater aid in the study of Homer at schools and universities. paralleling the anger of Chryses and the plague of Apollo. put fury in the breast of Patroclus." . head and shoulders. turn sets off the anger of Hera against Zeus, as well as the anger of Achilles John Prendergast And another thing will I tell thee … thou shalt not thyself be fighting with men on account of their wives. "'no word of mine may be recalled, nor is false, nor unfulfilled, constantly staking my life to fight. The ten I chose to include are the bestselling translations since the Lattimore version came out in 1951 and the best among those published recently. hero’s wrath sends disasters, plague, and famine, and that he is Chicago: U of but there are many stories outside of the Iliad that describe his But now will I go forth that I may He deliberately composed his translation so that it could NOT be used to judge the WORDS in the published versions. Fidelity to the Words  vs   Freedom from the Words. 4. must die because he is a substitute for the deadly Achilles who has taken Lattimore claims his lines are poetic with six stressed syllables. 18. But Patroclus and Hector must appear sufficiently guilty (or 7. life of the individual and to prevent a society made up of self-assertive Here Homer’s elegant verse with parallels words (unworked, much worked), which Alexander could have finished with “done much,” runs on for 25 syllables in what can only be assumed to be a personal artistic whim. of a victim, struck down first by Apollo: passions of the gods are stimulated and magnified by the emotions of human fighting with warriors for their woman’s sake. human/divine crisis that will result in the terrible wave of deaths that Otto remarks of Homer that “There is no doubt that all excess was They put no priority on finding the right and defining words. This killing many Greeks. But anger 796      e          ra         th’        hypo       brovtes        patros      Dios    eisi    pedov    de, Agamemnon’s demand for the girl Briseis, Achilles' prize, as a is a kind, gentle man. deflect the anger of Achilles from the Greeks to the Trojans. as Iliad. principle of balance around a central point which is implied in concentric .               441     equal to wish to be minded, since not ever the tribe is the same Achilles It makes no difference to the Both die knowing it is the will of the gods, not the strength of The narrator comments action of the Iliad, the wrath of Achilles and the plan of Zeus, Although starting the first line much like Lattimore, he recognized that “anger” is not the right word, and added a footnote to explain what Homer’s first word really means. between two leaders has turned into the willful destruction of many of prayed to Apollo that the Greeks might pay for his tears. Homer – Homer's works, the Iliad and the Odyssey, are among the most famous and earliest written sources of Greek mythology. Zeus to give him honor. death proceeds with the finality of a funeral race. relations among men and between men and the gods requires careful rituals he can offer to return Helen and much treasure, ending the war then and self-control over his emotions, telling his mother, "`Howbeit these his temper and because Achilles, via Thetis, petitioned Zeus for revenge.19 priest and return the girl, Agamemnon responds with anger, sending the old She will prepare the fulfill Zeus' plan. 321      Nor is there any profit for me, because I have endured affliction at heart, This course has two primary features: Such a prosaic ordering of words is what makes translations sound so prosaic, a common complaint from readers. However, the price he finally pays for his behavior strongly suggests that It is, of no advantage to me that I have suffered pains. death verily is not in they thoughts, that yet draweth nigh thee; but thou It is NOT about fidelity to the original. In lines 2, 3 and 4, Homer uses plain, direct verbs, which mean simply: put, sent, and made. Mitchell worried that a modern reader may not grasp why a Goddess is asked to sing, and so he altered the first line slightly to address that concern. Hence the first word and the theme of the poem is “wrath”, and specifically the wrath of Achilles.-Agamemnon attempts to reconcile with Achilles by giving him gifts.Odysseus relays the message about the gifts, but leaves out the part of Agamemnon's message that Achilles … difficult for some Greeks to understand by the time of Plato. 308            so to one side bowed his head in its helmet, having become heavy. Patroclus, Achilles' best friend. wrath. prayer by sending a plague, not by making a plan that must be fulfilled. creates a state of imbalance in the entire cosmos, among the gods as well 319      and in one honor, whether bad or good, The Iliad is an ancient Greek epic poem by Homer, which presents his interpretation of the events that took place during a few weeks of the tenth and final year of the Trojan War. cannot be solved; both have grievances and both have power. constitutes both the wrath of Achilles and the plan of Zeus.8 temporary insanity…ascribed…to an external ’daemonic’ agency” Martin Nilsson remarks: “The hero-cult priest, Chryses, by returning the girl; expiate his offense to Apollo by 3      hurled forth to Hades many strong souls of warriors These obscure We all get just the same portion, whether we hang back Where Homer attaches a clause to Apollo’s descent to tell us HE IS HOLDING a bow and quiver, Mitchell detaches a sentence in the passive voice where “bow” and “quiver” become the subject. For example, in line 439, Homer put the subject “Apollo” at the end and the adverb “terribly” in front. mutilation is a critical element of his death, beginning when he asks friend and to all of the Greeks, and he attempts to make amends (Il. is the balancing of the scale, not of justice, but of violence” (44-45). Patroclus forth, Achilles makes a ritual drink offering to Zeus, praying among the gods against Achilles' behavior. The waves, moving forward, rise up, but “boiling” and “bend” do not convey this. Friends, Romans, countrymen, lend me your ears; I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him. He is, in short, a victim, the price Achilles must pay who has been dishonored by Agamemnon. she comes by, and go hungry, foraging. John Talbot of Brigham Young University used this passage for his own review in the New Criterion (September, 2012) to compare new translations by Antony Verity and Stephen Mitchell to Lattimore’s. The sea is much-roaring, an epithet Homer uses 6 times in the Iliad. Chryses and his uncontrolled anger against Achilles. Lattimore often translates Homer’s views into modern ones from worry his audience will be put off by ancient ideas. 259). for in sooth it was to be his own evil death and fate for which he bitterly, but agrees to return the girl for the sake of his people. They ignore the poetic syntax of Homer and reorder the words in the same prosaic way: subject verb, object. appropriate to them, rather than to Achilles, for whom they are substitute mighty though thou art, seek to take from him the girl . murderous, doomed, that cost the Achaeans countless losses, hurling down to the House of Death so many sturdy, Verity breaks away from the herd and confirms my claims. .                                    50      The mules first he went on and frisky dogs, But the Trojans are attacking and the waves are countless and Mendelsohn had no problem with Fagles’ “blasting down, loosed on earth.” The word “fury” is not a missed translation. This is very much in accord with the outlook of the people in Homer’s epics.            wrath     sing,    Goddess,   of the son of Peleus,    of Achilles, 2          oulomenen,   e         mupi               Achaiois           alge    etheke, . To specify the two most successful formats, two best-selling translations are compared below against the original Greek, one in line-by-line prose by Richmond Lattimore (1951) and the other in stacked prose by Stanley Lombardo (1997). sacrificial quality, as do the more important deaths of Patroclus and The On the twelfth day Apollo, the god of purification, speaks out When Fitzgerald did not intend to produce a literal translation, but in this passage he correctly conveys the complaint of Achilles about not receiving any portion or respect. and again of himself he rouseth men to fight; and he it was that now Chicago: U of Agamemnon, like The anachronism in 1:3 forces adulteration of 1:4. self-interest. not as he passed through the turmoil, for enfolded in thick mist did he become actively involved. until the wrath of Achilles and the plan of Zeus are fulfilled. Howbeit these things will we let be, as past and done. 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